Thanks for having the guts to share your music with us DJ. Not everybody on the SZ is willing to do so. I know for me it was a bold step but one in which I was willing to take.

I had a listen to Wrapped and I really enjoyed it. Your voice does have a Rock genre type sound to it. You have quite a vocal range which is to your benefit. As others have pointed out when singing the higher notes you sometimes have a tendency to over emphasize certain words which could draw attention away from the song as a whole. But don't let discouragement get a hold of you because you would be surprised at how many world class and famous singers have had a rough go of it only to find that after much practice, Vocal training, and in the most important thing of all, getting out there and singing before an audience which is where the rubber meets the road and provides the much needed experience of practical application, those previously infamous singers over time became what they are today or in their time, ie., "World class and World famous singers". Your voice has that special quality that if harnessed you could go a long way and the sky is the limit as to what you could attain.

Merry Christmas!
Best regards,
Mike