OT -- Original song "Fifty Nine And Holdin"

Give me a birthday present, how 'bout it... your time! All you fine folks, would sure appreciate honest feedback on this. I recorded it upon first waking this morning, literally one take, no warm up, so it's not a very good recording, but good enough to get the song across. What do you think of this, does it strike you in any way good or bad?

LINK:
http://soundcloud.com/bill-pittman/fifty-nine-and-holdin

I like it! You been reading my mail.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you as well!
DonM

very nice. Really liked the lyrics and the simplicity but integrity of the vocals. thanks you for the song and happy birthday to you .

... very poignant, Bill ... can't see why that wouldn't make the C/W charts ...

On the lighter side ...HAPPY BIRTHDAY


Celebrate EVERY one, 'cause there ain't NEVER enough of them ...

Way to go, DUDE...I mean OLDER Dude!


R.

Nice Job Bill enjoyed your new song & Happy Birthday!!

Happy birthday Bill.

That's another classic to be added to the Best Of Bill album.
Eddie

Loved the song Bill, great progression throughout, tells a wonderful story.

Wow! 59 - I knew you would eventually begin catching up to me. Yep, at one time I was twice your age.

Keep em' coming,

Gary