Hi Matty
I liked your tune much better, even though I prefer the B3 version. I see you are coming along with your improv-that's good. You might think about a few fills in a little stronger comp and melody, though, this is just my taste.
Keep it going Matty. This is what the forum needs more of.
Bernie
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