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#256778 - 02/16/09 10:00 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
btweengigs Offline
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Registered: 09/09/02
Posts: 2204
Loc: Florida, USA
No problem here either.
Song began right after My Space opened.

Larry...
Very interesting chord pattern and I think you have excellent command of your keyboard.

In all honesty, I don't relate to this style music (I'm a dance hall guy) ...so don't feel qualified to critique your song. I admire your ingenuity and tenacity....two qualities that are crucial to success.

Eddie

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#256779 - 02/16/09 10:03 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
Dnj Offline
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Registered: 09/21/00
Posts: 43700
eddie...do you have to belong to my space? or have to sign in etc etc ? the whole right side is blank where the player usualy is?

[This message has been edited by Dnj (edited 02-16-2009).]

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#256780 - 02/16/09 10:06 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
btweengigs Offline
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Registered: 09/09/02
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Loc: Florida, USA
No Donny....I don't subscribe to My Space. It just popped up after clicking on the link

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#256781 - 02/16/09 10:25 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
leeboy Offline
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Registered: 10/09/04
Posts: 2580
Loc: Ocala, FL USA
Quite honestly ...Larry...I love it!
My kind of music as well..
Nice production too.
Lee
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#256782 - 02/16/09 10:25 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
Dnj Offline
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I give up

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#256783 - 02/16/09 10:46 AM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
Bill in Dayton Offline
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Registered: 08/23/04
Posts: 2202
Loc: Dayton, OH USA
The hook in the chorus I think is stronger than any hook I've heard from Larry.

The bridge lifts but doesn't really drop me where I wanted to be dropped. Not necessarily a bad thing, just a comment.

Lyrically, I liked the chorus lines, the verses/bridge sounded kind of trite.

I've tried writing lyrics in the past and quickly found out its not my strong suite. Back in the 80's a studio guy who'd been around Nashville for 20 some years looked at my stuff and said something to the effect "instead of finding all these goofy ways of saying you love someone, why not just say it instead of trying to be so cutesy?" Very few of us can really pull off being a wordsmith, and we're usually better off trying a different approach. My different approach was to sing other people's songs, because I'm a mess when it comes to writing my own lyrics, lol...

Recording was sharp...

Cheers-

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Bill in Dayton

[This message has been edited by Bill in Dayton (edited 02-16-2009).]
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#256784 - 02/16/09 12:03 PM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
leeboy Offline
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Registered: 10/09/04
Posts: 2580
Loc: Ocala, FL USA
Donny,
Right click on the link and select open in new tab (or window) Mine dodn't work until I did that.

Lee S.
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#256785 - 02/16/09 12:08 PM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
Dnj Offline
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Registered: 09/21/00
Posts: 43700
Hi Lee....I just tried that ....it opens to the myspace page but there is NO music player to view the song....if I scroll down and click Trackspin it goes to that site but the song only plays 20 seconds in the middle

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#256786 - 02/16/09 12:13 PM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
Beakybird Offline
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Registered: 01/27/01
Posts: 2227
Donny,

Please email me at lhl2468@aol.com, and I will email you the song.

Thanks to the people who took time to listen to it.

Beakybird

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#256787 - 02/16/09 12:50 PM Re: Please listen to original: "In My House of Love"
travlin'easy Online   happy
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Registered: 12/08/02
Posts: 15550
Loc: Forest Hill, MD USA
Good job on this one Larry. You really know how to make that S-900 rock.

Cheers,

Gary
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